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It was a summer of copper hued water flowing gently
...With the sounds of mandolins in the air...
An ambience embellished with vibrant colour
And me with purple ribbon's in my hair.
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Hmmmmmmm.... there's a deliciousness about this poem, Theo. The colors, the warmth of words, the longing.... they weave a dreamy texture to this poem.... water flowing gently the sounds of mandolins in the air... And me with purple ribbon's in my hair. a glorious summer of pure sunshine sweet birds of song a perfect day of romance Bathed in loves warmest of touch... Nestled here, all cozy, but missing you so much. Set in an Indian summer for just we two - - - -those so well chosen words and phrases embraced the reader with such soft memories of love. well done, Theo. 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Susan, thank you so much for your wonderful review. It means a lot to me coming from you, dear. i wrote this some time ago and found it amongst my files of poetry and decided to finally post it. Makes me feel good to know that you read it. Forever grateful to you Susan.
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7/26/2025 7:26:22 PM # 1.0.0
A wonderful poem-when we see the face of nature and feel her blessing on love...we have a memory whiches causes a longing! Really great poetry.
Thank you so very much Bill! You are very kind and your words give me encouragement - I admire much of your poetry...must apologize for too frequent absences-illness has kept me away.