Sunday, November 30, 2008

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Cowered, I live unto thee
Prostrate in submission to the Almighty
Time is transient as they walk in envy
For all these I say, is fitted to a “T”
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Meggie Gultiano
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Greenwolfe 1962 09 April 2009

I was able to follow the piece very well until the end. I cannot say whether the ending was good or not, because I did not understand what it meant. What message was this piece trying to send exactly. That, I cannot say. GW62

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Fiona Davidson 06 April 2009

Powerful words Meggie...great write....10

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Vaibhav Pandey 06 April 2009

powerful & stunning.......10

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Ben Gieske 06 April 2009

I like the 'fumble and tumble' and 'What is beauty to a scar'. Nice phrasing and very thought provoking. It seems like life is not more than just this moment if we do not have memories or faith.

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Luis Gil 13 December 2008

What is beauty to a scar? Excellent, Meggie. Shine on.

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Robert Howard 07 December 2008

The construction and destruction of civilization are both group efforts. All health is in the former.

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JoAnn McGrath 01 December 2008

WOWZA! ....that was deep....bookmark for me: O)

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Ency Bearis 30 November 2008

lovely.. nice and strong words..10 Ency Bearis

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 30 November 2008

You moved me, Meggie Just so wonderful Sweetie.. Andy 10

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