Tuesday, May 8, 2018

Transient Love Comments

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Nothing I write in this white paper for our life
Darling evades word on morning untidy bed
Left or right side plays conceit of love in sad
Feelings enter here as like boat of portal hive
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Dr Antony Theodore 24 April 2019

Syntax makes dome of warmth breath of thread Starry twinkling compiles thy soul not to be fed Tiresome verbose home shatters all on eye knife... very nice poem. very poetic usage of words and expressions. dear Mahtab. tony

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Ink of Sin 08 May 2018

মাহতাব তুমি প্রেম কর গভীর অনুধ্যানী হয়ে প্রেমিকে করোনা অবহেলা কবিতা লিখতে গিয়ে! !

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