Transient Love Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Transient Love

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Nothing I write in this white paper for our life
Darling evades word on morning untidy bed
Left or right side plays conceit of love in sad
Feelings enter here as like boat of portal hive
Beak of heron teaches me to meet your strife
Syntax makes dome of warm breath of thread
Starry twinkling compiles thy soul not to be fed
Tiresome verbose home shatters all on eye knife

You've come as like picnic in my utopia of writing
Have gone tie-less; shaking both charming chest
Too far trance from my leisurely pensive mood
Grave of tenacity I find in my wordily of frighten
Unknowingly the last swan flies too upper as best
Harsh leaf awakes sense as shining dawn code


-Mary 08,2018, Chattogram

Tuesday, May 8, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship,neglect,separation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 24 April 2019

Syntax makes dome of warmth breath of thread Starry twinkling compiles thy soul not to be fed Tiresome verbose home shatters all on eye knife... very nice poem. very poetic usage of words and expressions. dear Mahtab. tony

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Ink of Sin 08 May 2018

মাহতাব তুমি প্রেম কর গভীর অনুধ্যানী হয়ে প্রেমিকে করোনা অবহেলা কবিতা লিখতে গিয়ে! !

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