Sunday, July 19, 2020

Transient Beauty Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the mirror of her eyes~
all the hues of the edelweiss,
a shining star for one night.
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Marieta Maglas
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Linda Bella Wassermeister 30 October 2021

Very nice. Short and sweet!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 October 2021

True naturalist (not surrealist) painting added, most beautiful expression in her face. Fantastic painter.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 October 2021

This is poem sublimest, dear Marieta! Happiest to 'see' you here now, Truly very happy am I since PF. Have I said EXCELLENT POEM? 5 Stars and to my Favourites

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Mystic Indian 24 October 2021

deep and profound. thank you for your expression.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 13 September 2020

make it a shining star for all the nights

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 13 August 2020

Wow a brilliant poem reflecting the stars in eyes so poetically wow. Great in brevity. Kudos! Plz do read and comment your thoughts on my newest prose titled, " face veils/face masks same thing " as it fosters an understanding of the shared veiling practice btw east and west since history.

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Rajendran muthiah 20 July 2020

The flowery plant , edelweiss has a short span of life. So its colors reflected from the eyes too.

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Sandra Feldman 19 July 2020

The beauty and delicacy of this poem, transcends the written word and so delicately reaches the spirit. Just enchanting! Merci bien, Madame.

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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