Transiency Comments

@Valsa George, Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Yes, 'we are all waiting for some other destination. In this journey lesser luggage is more comfortable as all of us will have to leave behind our cargo. All that we can carry is our good deeds! ' It's a correct depiction of our situation as a traveller on life's path. I am glad to know that you too 'often have similar broodings' as mine!

@Edward Kofi Louis, Thanks for reading the poem and kindly commenting on it!

@Hazel Durham, Thanks for sharing your thoughts Hazel, I am so much inspired by the comment! My best wishes for you! I've just read your beautiful poem 'Skies Are Changing' and commented on it.

This poem shows that you have a clear perception of life....! We are travellers waiting at the exit lounge. We do not know when our flight is scheduled.... but we are sure of onething....! We are all waiting for some other destination. In this journey lesser luggage is more comfortable as all of us will have to leave behind our cargo. All that we can carry is our good deeds! I often have similar broodings!

Deeds! ! With positive morals. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Superb write with such wise words and our virtues will bring us on a journey of happiness and peace!

a finest poem on funeral prayers- yes, the good deeds, the noble virtues, the charity, the kindness, the compassion are our luggage for the ultimate destination and these all mundane goodness are allowed on the transit flight schedule.../// great write and great ++++++++++++++++10