Saturday, December 21, 2019

Transience Comments

Rating: 5.0

Repose doesn't come up ripe
no more inputs, right
what could be such super feed
that ignites robust sleep
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Edward Kofi Louis 09 February 2020

Super Dark! ! ! A shadow. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 January 2020

Transience.....the oldest song on earth, each time in a brand new coat, and created in full elegance and new spirit. I must exclaim again: What a Beauty is this laden and layered poem! so many marvelous metaphors to enjoy! Thank you so much for sharing this fantastic though sad poem, Kesav.

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Kesav Easwaran 06 January 2020

New becomes old, old becomes new. It is all His Grace. The sleep and the dream also. Thanks for your detailed feedback Sylvie. Liked

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kerala- India
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