Saturday, November 12, 2016

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i see death's shadow
leaves succumbing to autumn
chlorophyll withdrawn
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Govind Ramakrishnan
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Rajesh Thankappan 15 November 2016

The poem reminds us of the fragility of life. Wonderful write.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 November 2016

Nature is wonderful. Death is a truth we know and shadow of life is interesting definitely. Amazing poem this is.10

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