Monday, March 24, 2008

Transformation Extraordinaire Comments

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For this I know, it was not so long ago I met a captivating butterfly
On its journey by and by perched this butterfly on my windowsill
Beautiful the butterfly to my eye brought a tear I dry
Every waking moment I tried to spend with my friend the butterfly for which I had fallen
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Wilfred Mellers
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* Sunprincess * 22 June 2014

..........so quick was the change of a beautiful butterfly into a dragonfly....wish the dragonfly would have just been proud of who she was.... instead of trying to be something she was not.....great message in this write.....it's always best to be yourself.....

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Kentierra Copeland 27 April 2012

OMG..ii love thiis poem!

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Tia Metcher 02 August 2008

'Hi! ', If only I could write like you. This is exactly how I feel. I have been trying to write a poem like this using discriptive words and display a lot of imagery, but couldn't put it into words. You have done outstanding on this poem. very creative. WELL DONE! Cheers :)

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Wilfred Mellers

Wilfred Mellers

Kinston, Jamaica, West Indies
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