Sunday, August 11, 2024

Transformation ~ Comments

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In days of yore, when passions ran high
and sentiments were raw and nigh
humans turned to beasts, with nary a sigh
their hatred flamed, and humanity did die
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M. Asim Nehal
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 11 August 2024

What you mention in the third stanza is so true BRavo TFS Asim

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 August 2024

About your poem: Excellently composed, brilliantly worded TOP Marks 5 Stars for thee and thy poem, Dr. M. Asim Nehal. I have enjoyed enormously your fantastic poem

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 August 2024

Beautiful poem, sweetly rhymed, nowadays we have a living animal in human person, human will kill this animal, as always human wins from animal, as a very intelligent person, you know WHO I mean,

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Mana Kavingyan 11 August 2024

Well said sir

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Nabakishore Dash 11 August 2024

True, we are not humans anymore.Beast men inside, but morphology of human's

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M. Asim Nehal

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