Saturday, June 7, 2008

Transformation Comments

Rating: 5.0

A caterpillar sheds her skin, to find a butterfly within

An oyster yields tears of pain, to create a pearl so trim
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Al Ramos 16 June 2008

If we mortals shed our skin, will we see deep enough to know what is within.

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Stone Granite 14 June 2008

Inspiringly beautiful, with a message that resonates an encouraging optimism that all should take heed. High praise for this wonderful poem - 10. Stone

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Michael Fischer 07 June 2008

Great write...your theme is empowering! Top marks! -Michael

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