Friday, January 23, 2009

Transcendence Comments

Rating: 5.0

Seeds, berries, and foods in short supply
flocks of feathered friends made a V line
to a place of plenty.
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Almedia Knight-Oliver
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Dr.subhendu Kar 14 August 2010

Before...an evening star stood alone in the shadow of the sun. but on this winter day, an era of change is on the way.............................. walk still hitches on its way eyes when suffers vision demented, yet we are lost in maddened world all across, dawn seems to rollicking to follies of man, wonderful write, yet humanistic and spirit of living as when subdued by arrogance of intemperance, transcendence seems to suffer enigma, most ingenious write,10+++, thanks for sharing

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‘open hands to friends and foes alike./So that the whole world can live/on a well-preserved planet’ Utopian concept…only possible when 'my' 'me' 'myself' 'I' etc get obliterated and disappear … And thro’ your panacea ‘The Transcendent One.’ ‘Unsion Montage’ 10+. Ms. Nivedita UK

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Yacov Mitchenko 27 February 2010

The sentiments are admirable and eloquent, Almedia. By the way, how are you nowadays?

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Claude H Oliver Ii 23 November 2009

Insightful depth of vision, well penned.

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Steven S 13 August 2009

Did you send this to him.... you ought to... your writing is good, and he would appreciate this... you could help be the change you want in the world... sometimes the littlest thing makes the biggest thing happen.

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