Transcendence Comments

A wonderful poem, filled with hope. Thank you for sharing.

Nicely written. One more beautiful read and thank you for it. G.

Some transcendental experiential dadaism. The physical journey into invisible being. The celestial realms. The impulse that weaves the texture and idiom of the poem is the actual continuum of thought and matter.

'Yet the dark brings sweet redemption...' and again ' nothing there will be my captor' wonderfully written ; inducing one to read it again & again. May I seek your views on my compositions 'Rebirth' and 'Cry of a Soul'.

You have some of the most beautiful thoughts.

so i just reread this - and it was just as new to me as the first time i read it. 10 out of 10!

Enjoyed this sweet, serene, melodious piece of work.

i seriously love this one - - have you ever read any Sara Teasdale - - your styles are similar - - i think it comes down to the true lyricism of a fine poet, as well as culminating a large portion of thought in a few lines. you are magnificent, keep sharing your great lyrics withus!

love the serenity here... you are at peace.

An awesome poem, nice flow and pleasure to read

A very spiritual poem...such gentleness! Love reading it again and again.

The end of the fight for earthly possessions is observed in the write-well penned

Val, in reading all of your new works there's an equanimity they speak and an awareness of how our lives merge with the infinite. It certainly is a positive view that transcends the worldly and as always is written beautifully. Dick Lackman

Most beautiful read for today. Peace flows in heart with your words.

Pregnant with peace and bursting with beauty. Well done my friend!

i love it just like other poems of yours...you just can't help your self can you mam, why you always have to make me speechless.....you are just beautiful, bold, brilliant poet i ever met thank you for sharing love payal

So peaceful! A beautiful write! Like a grateful lullaby. Soothing and soft. X

This shall be one of my favorites, Val!

Perfected beauty; as I've said before, you are truly a pure poet. Your poems stand far and above anything I could ever compose, simply stunning words! I love the way you write.

A fine sleepy poem, harmonious and uniform with the world and the ubiquitous and enticing peace that abounds. Thank you.