Tranquillity Of A Loving Mist Comments

dear sandhya, hats off to your poetic wordpower in descibing the mist deep within........and veiled emotions...........

sandhya, you took me back to my early working place...I was working as an apprentice in walayar, malabar cement mines...on a hilltop...wow...mist used to cover us in no time..none knows from where it had come...you vanish...beyond being.... then we used to smoke within that fog...so chill out and so warm within...what a feeling... eventhough i stopped smoking, god only knows whether i can resist smoking in such a situation again... that time i was free from the magic spell of love! if it was also with me, sure i would have buried me deep within that............

A silent and warm expression of warmth felt in a misty way. Comparison with hills and surrounding atmosphere is added beauty.

This is so beautiful, soft, simple and melodious. Quite an interesting write....10

soooooooooo lovely.....great craft shared! ! ! !