Tranquility Poem by DM W

Tranquility

Rating: 5.0


O beautiful fish
Abound in crystal oceans:
In deep blue dreaming.

Tranquility
Wednesday, October 16, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: tranquility
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mihaela Pirjol 16 October 2019

The last verse makes perfectly the juxtaposition in this well-written Haiku! The mood created for the reader is: tranquility.

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Dominic Windram 16 October 2019

Thanks so much Mihaela...I completely agree with you!

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