Tranquility Comments

Impressive write! Definitely enjoyed this piece! ! !

It does what it says on the box, and brings with the reading a feeling of wonderful tranquility. Nice work!

Very nice. A good poem

Fantastic wrote! Beautiful words have been used to compose this one!

it is very tranquil! what a nice piece..thanks for sharing!

Expressive and simultaneously impressive.Tranquility has your speech here..in reticent but resplendant verses..

The way and manner you use metaphors to unravel your stanzas is splendid; I love the way you apply alliterations; Your rhymes are not slant; I think you know what you are doing;

hmmmmm, nice but was thinking i u could make your writing a little bit simple...cause of the topic itself beckons for simplicity....hope u understand....

I like your expressive words dear friend.It moved a lot inside my heart.Thanks again for your invitation.

I really appreciate this poem. It makes me think of the Paradise earth that is yet to come, but will soon arrive. I feel like it brings out the idea of everything being peaceful and unified. We need more poems like this to remind us, that world conditions won't be like this forever. Jehovah God has promised us a beautiful, paradise earthly home, which we are sure to recive very soon. Love it! 10+10+10+10+10+10+10+10+10+10=100

i read ur poem.i think u dream about a utopia that is never found by man in today world. but you can find the serenity and tranquility in depth of your soul. your immoral soul created by God and your emotion and your idea about others.

really nice! Great choice of words

This is so unique poem and I really enjoy this poem.

i just love this poem :)

I love your penned writing already, i'm very honored you invited me, and wanting to be my friend. Its very beautiful, Thankyou. I actually understand what your saying. thank you.

keep writing brother, the wonderful world of great words needs your worth more, you r good, am happy to know you.

Solidarity, classy writing is your Tranquility, Aqeb...what else should i say except this is great poem from you...Dont stop writing, you know the idea always pooled in your mind right? _Unwritten Soul

I like the surreal translucent nature of the words that build a sense of calm from beginning till end.

i love it! ! ! ! ! its good

Sooooo deeeep...airy lands of the skies....