Tranquil Beneath The Trees Comments

A great poem... I feel I'm been graced with the winds of tranquility while reading this poem...^__^

Beautiful english you use! A true poets poem

great imagrey Obinna, keep up the great work! 10! !

I could imagine myself beneath the trees. Thank you.

This is a good poem I like the imagery. Draw back the rhyming is slightly forced and too wordy.

The first stanza is my favourite as it reels me in to my comfy tranquil place. Thanks for sharing.

Last line magical and I don't know why.

You recreate for me the magic of a moonlit night. The language and imagery are superb.10.

I love this poem Its amazing how a walk in the woods can calm you body and soul. Great write keep it up.

beautiful... nature made us and out of nature we are fome and of course to nature we all come back. however the peace and calmness man could experience through nature is a stroke of the 'mother' to his son...

My friend Obinna, It is the tranquility of nature sometimes makes a man realize the wonders of life...great right...thanks for inviting me...I am fine but I am out of my country for a mission...Sorry for the late read, hmn? Keep on...I learned from great poets here like you. Be well. Greca

Dear Obinna, It is a well written poem, almost like a Keats' one. Well done. And I like some feelings and images that suggest Africa! I like Africa and Benin in particular. I suggest that you bring your culture and country more into your poems. Doing so would make them really special and real. We want to know more about you and your people. Make them alive as well as your nature, the antelopes and the lions, the African nights, the bronze sculptures and the wooden ones, the old forest spirits and maybe the new ones (globalization, Americanization, etc.) . All the best. Enea

love it so much! ! ! ! ! ! you used very beautiful words... never imagine a place like that.... amazing! ! 10+++

Damn wat can i say it so beautiful i wish i could of been in dat kind of place! calm, quite, peaceful....wonderful

thank-you i really needed that...so calming :) ......great read.....absolutely beautiful! love it! ......its going into favorites! 10+++

This was beautiful, and it relieved some of the stress on my mind. Thank You,10/10! I'm adding to this to my favorite, for when I need a pick-me-up.

A delightful word-picture. The reader is drawn along by the easy, relaxed rythm. Imaginitive use of language and form. Thank you for a good, enjoyable read.

It's beautiful! And great imagery! It was like I was actually walking through an enchanted glen, listening to everything it has to say. I love it!

A very enchanting, well thought out poem, the celestial effect of nature reflected through these kaleidoscopic lines

beautifully written, my friend. it had to be a great night, that it inspired you to write words like this to describe it. :)