Tramp Or Man.....The Wandering Homeless Comments

A fine character portrayal in smoothly flowing couplets, as usual the whole gamut goes well with story to the end. It is penned with a compassionate and king heart. We can find such figures everywhere around us.

I have seen this person on my roads too Saadat, very sorry plight. I have always wanted to start a home for neglected old age parents who walk around with no hope, no love. Your poem has made me more determined to start off soon. Thanks for firing my dreams. Angel