Sunday, January 3, 2016

Tramp Comments

Rating: 5.0

His legs have grown weary n' weak
A heavy baggage on his back
Heavier still is the burden inside
A bumpy road ahead, no one to guide
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 October 2019

Yes madam, you have rightly said that we are all tramps. We have to move on with heavy burden. A well executed poem is amazingly shared. Thanks for sharing.

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To tramp carrying the heavy baggage of life through the unfamiliar and rough paths is what man is destined. The poem reiterate the fact. Thank you very much poetess.....10

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Pamela Sinicrope 08 January 2016

This poem is a compact account of how we humans live our lives. 'We are all tramps, ' wading through life with our bag of memories, accumulated stuff, family, experiences, just looking for the next place to lay it down and rest awhile. Your writing brought The Things They Carried, and A Christmas Carol to mind. Thanks for sharing. An expressive piece of writing.

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Akhtar Jawad 07 January 2016

A touching poem on a bitter reality of life, how helpless we are, but it's our belief in God that we remain hopeful and with a burden on our backs, we move on.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 January 2016

The sun is about to set, the sky hostile Desperately he tries to reach out to light.. Very interesting expression shared definitely. This conveys about deep emotional meaning. Excellent poem...10

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 03 January 2016

Expecting victory and defeat in turn with burden on our backs, we move on! -Life well depicted

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 January 2016

A bumpy road; tramp, ramp! Thanks for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 03 January 2016

We win, we lose. We live, we die. That is the story of life. Well written

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 03 January 2016

Some people are unfortunately tramps since there is nobody to support them;

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M Asim Nehal 03 January 2016

A burden to carry all the time till we breath the last...nicely written poem...10

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Aarzoo Mehek 03 January 2016

Emotional baggage just kills and Physical baggage we all try to move on with it. Indeed we all are tramps on an unknown journey, faltring, rising and again faltering to reach the destination...One touchy poem.10 for this heart wrenching thoughts.

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