Friday, June 29, 2007

Trainwreck Comments

Rating: 3.2

...Diligence it served me well?
Shadow waiting tenaciously 'neath your veil
Grasping at straws of needful answers
...Your train-about to derail
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Who's Erwhatsit 06 July 2007

Ah yes, there is no undoing what has already been done: -( Hope you are doing Good, another nice write! Lots of hugs and nice thoughts your way, Dena

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 29 June 2007

I love this, it Rhymes so well.. who is this Herbert, he is a bit of a sexist is he not, abusive little ****, excuse me theo i hate bad manners...10

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Herbert Nehrlich1 29 June 2007

I think this may be too cold for a woman to write. Stay away from the outer edge of any limb as it may break off. This would benefit from a good night's sleep. H

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