Thursday, October 20, 2016

Train To Derry Comments

Rating: 4.6

A crow beats on the updraft over a scragged hawthorn,
rocked but plunging on. A stick of Paras, bristling with nerves,
coughs and boots forward along the sheugh.
Long after the soldiers have gone, the crows will settle home.
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Theo Dorgan
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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 June 2023

Truly enjoyed this Modern Poem Of The Day. Congratulations, Sir!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 June 2023

CONGRATULATIONS being chosen by PoemHunter and Team as The Modern Poem Of The Day, great reading for us, this brilliant poem by an Irish Poet. TOP Marks.

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Paul Reed 17 May 2018

This poem has so many facets. Third verse very special.

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Rajnish Manga 31 October 2017

The poem brings to fore not only the scenes on a train journey but also a fine portrayal of sentiments of a true lover his native and of humanity in this life. Thank you, Theo. I often wish, my love, that we were birds, the wide domains of Ireland.... let me fold you in my wings

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Bernard F. Asuncion 31 October 2017

Such a great poem, Theo... congrats for being chosen....10++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 October 2017

Moving and impressive one. Nice penmanship. Thanks and congratulations for being selected as the poem of the day.

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Michael Walker 31 October 2016

A very impressive poem, set against the background of The Troubles. M.Walker.

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Susan Williams 31 October 2016

What a well-done use of contrast- but I am woman so I want to curl up with his last 8 lines. I want to read more by this poet. If this poem is anything to go by, the rest of his work would be an honor to read.

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Indira Renganathan 31 October 2016

very much moving...highly skillful work to touch the reader's heart...great-10

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 October 2016

Bristling with nerves! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 31 October 2016

I often wish, my love, that we were birds, .... What a nice line! ! ..... Congrats for being selected.....

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Paul Reed 20 October 2016

The longevity of the crows outlasts the wars, as nature outlasts man. Great lines including the final two which I think is a philosophical acceptance of the moment.

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Theo Dorgan

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