Tuesday, March 25, 2008

Train To Aberdovey Comments

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The curves of Wales gave birth to view
By train of green and lined with blue
Feet from water, inches from sand and otherside
the shepherd's land.
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Yvonne Rautenbach
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Lynda Robson 25 March 2008

Great poem Yvonne, having been to Aberdovey I think you have captured the sights on the way on the train, good imagery,10 Lynda xx

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