Train Through The Crop Fields Comments

In many ways a fascinatingly beautiful poem accompanied by a wonderful picture. The symbol of the train is used brilliantly by you too. A fine poem Mr Mahakul. Thanks for sharing.

What a wonderful train journey if we could pass through the crop fiellds. We could see the beauty of growing crops and even people attending the fields. This marvelous poem depicts this beautiful sight. Liked the second stanza that composed striking lines. In just a few seconds, I was able to have a train journey through this amazing poem. Beautifully crafted and well executed write.10++++

congrats now u have become or stepped up to 447/500oet of PH Hope you will walk side by side with Tagore one day today or some day if not today...beautiful train journey you make me recall a great writers train journey rail/train to Pakistan also i recalled my first train journey when i was three your poetry is so lovely see all butterflies come to feed okay read..Hve you read my recent INDO CANADIEN POETRY COMBO OF TWO LANGUAGES THE WORLD I HOP AROUND ITH GLEE and compose poetry

beautiful train journey you make me recall a great writers train journey rail/train to Pakistan also i recalled my first train journey when i was three your poetry is so lovely see all butterflies come to feed okay read..Hve you read my recent INDO CANADIEN POETRY COMBO OF TWO LANGUAGES THE WORLD I HOP AROUND ITH GLEE and compose poetry

A journey by train nicely described in philosophic style of Mahakul JI.

Another astounding poem about trains. Good play on the word 'train', and personification of the flowers gossiping with shrubs, and a few shrubs discussing beauty. There is striking beauty in your photo.

A beautiful journey on train with vivid imagery coming across while looking through its window. Enjoyed the journey. Thanks for sharing.

Hard work has given fruit to farmers, Train them through the crop fields, To regain knowledge of cultivation, The master clear sky is telling to all, Winter is singing for seasonal journey, Train is training to achieve life's goal. - - - - - - - -A great write on philosophy of life.

With nature things look beautiful here is also same when the train crosses through crops field it looks marvellous, nice poem, thanks for sharing the poem with us here in poemhunter,10

A great poem replete with imagery! I will find time to have a structural analysis of this beautiful poem! Appreciated...................................10