Tuesday, July 9, 2013

Train Ride To Nowhere Comments

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The train rolls out slowly
from the old terminal bay,
rusty wheels reluctantly
roll on rails all rickety,
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Ferdinand L Quintos
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Diane Montemayor 15 August 2016

Dear Sir Kababayan, Train symbolizes life's journey and its stages; and the power to control your life...It can be also described into a romance to separation.....Nice poem po, , , salamat ya baleg sir, diane

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Khairul Ahsan 13 July 2013

the train stops, doors open, all file out, men and women, but I beheld nothing new, all things remind me of you. Perfect description of a mind in love...a solitary soul in the crowd.

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Geetha Jayakumar 09 July 2013

Good poem. Train ride to nowhere.

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Gajanan Mishra 09 July 2013

all things remind me of you, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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