Tuesday, October 28, 2008

Train Of Thought Comments

Rating: 5.0

Something is approaching.
Clink! Clank! Clunk!
I attempt to stand where the doors open.
A rush of warm air overcomes me as I look for a seat.
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Ivan Ng1
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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 01 November 2008

marvellous....you have a very fresh charming way about putting imageries across...everyday topics treated lovngly.

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Joseph Poewhit 28 October 2008

Captures those train feelings

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I love the usage of sound.

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