Carrying passengers from far city,
Train has run miles on railway tracks,
Hope of journey is polished by love,
Train has arrived to its destination,
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Many times in life we bend and change our track like a train running on the rails, very late we realize we can move only on the rails already laid. A great philosophic poem.
beautiful writing- Towards new destination train may move, Just train is taking bend to arrive now. ..... vote//10+++++++++++++
An amazing poem that vividly depicts a journey by train. Mixing nature in this train journey is superb. Beautifully crafted and well executed write.10+++
sir you give life to just anything god helps thee spiritually trains also as they come in slowly
A very well crafted and highly descriptive poem with a sweet essence at its core. I really enjoyed it Mr Mahakul. Thanks for sharing: -)
A very pretty and descriptive poem! I liked it very much. :)
Passengers are eager to meet green trees. After getting-off in in the platform soon/They will shake hands with green leaves/Branches are bowing to welcome all/Towards new destination train may move.......a poem full of positivity with great hope..the train is unfurling message of love! Loved reading it! (10)
Tracks are interlinked to change the way! ! With the muse of the Train. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.