Tuesday, August 7, 2018

Train Is Taking Bend To Arrive Comments

Rating: 5.0

Carrying passengers from far city,
Train has run miles on railway tracks,
Hope of journey is polished by love,
Train has arrived to its destination,
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Edward Kofi Louis 19 September 2019

Tracks are interlinked to change the way! ! With the muse of the Train. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 10 August 2018

Many times in life we bend and change our track like a train running on the rails, very late we realize we can move only on the rails already laid. A great philosophic poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 08 August 2018

beautiful writing- Towards new destination train may move, Just train is taking bend to arrive now. ..... vote//10+++++++++++++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 August 2018

An amazing poem that vividly depicts a journey by train. Mixing nature in this train journey is superb. Beautifully crafted and well executed write.10+++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 07 August 2018

sir you give life to just anything god helps thee spiritually trains also as they come in slowly

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Red Soul 07 August 2018

A very well crafted and highly descriptive poem with a sweet essence at its core. I really enjoyed it Mr Mahakul. Thanks for sharing: -)

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Practicing Poetess 07 August 2018

A very pretty and descriptive poem! I liked it very much. :)

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 August 2018

Such a deep and meaningdul poem, Kumarmani...10++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 August 2018

Passengers are eager to meet green trees. After getting-off in in the platform soon/They will shake hands with green leaves/Branches are bowing to welcome all/Towards new destination train may move.......a poem full of positivity with great hope..the train is unfurling message of love! Loved reading it! (10)

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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