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A carriage full of dried moths, faces sour with old leather,
a midnight softness, perhaps a glass in water, slowly,
and you speak of love in the conjunctive,
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Very emotionally descriptive with the pain of an aching and longing heart. Should 'pass' be 'past'? Great poem. Thank you.
That's a very sad poem. It is very good, though. It is very well thought-out, and it is very thorough in its elements. You do a great job with your poetry. Great job. And thank you for the comment on my poem.
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7/18/2025 10:05:56 PM # 1.0.0
A very nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing it with us. E.K.L.