Train Comments

lovely write. it reminds me of my journey by train.

Lovely movement to this poem. Wonderful.

Applause for your creative energy. The sound effects are vivid and original. Your work is welcome here. Warmest regards, Sandra

Love it! Even those who fly first class and pay all the extra money don't arrive any sooner. They just get to smile first at the flight attendants as they head to the next 'ticket' window. Karin

Keep Inking them! ! ! I enjoyed this one very good imagery! 10 from me! ; -)

' SURELY you know SUREly you know SUREly you know HOW a choo-choo CHOO-choo choo-choo CHOO-choo train should go! woo wOOOOoo ' heh - very entertaining and a good one...

your way of candid reality in verse is a beauty of its own...keep writing...

beautiful...im speechless.

some vivid imagery and a command of sound effects that enhance