Friday, June 6, 2008

Trails Comments

Rating: 3.5

i follow the trails of our past
walking down the street
all the lights feel familiar
i remember everything
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Robert Miller
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Greenwolfe 1962 29 June 2008

This is a more traditional and common poem. It has the right structure and the message is clear. But a reader looking for something in a poem, will not find it here. GW62

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