Monday, April 13, 2009
Tragic Story Comments
Rating: ★3.5
There once was cheer.
When you were near
But now you’ve vanished
My life has finished
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You... don't... want me...
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Barry A. Lanier
18 April 2009
Sensing from your poetry Janay you have lost someone dear to you....hoping that your writing can be sharing the pain....as pain shared diminished in time...and the road to healing and recovery begins...not only write about it but find a friend and counselor to discuss it with.....
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7/29/2025 7:01:29 PM # 1.0.0
Janay, very sincere and well written, but the last line is very long