Sunday, January 6, 2008

Tragic Autumn Comments

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I sit staring out the window.
I watch trees shed life as
the fall air fills the lungs
of the lost and the hopeless.
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Anonymous *plz comment! * 22 January 2008

i like it, the poeticness of it (if thats a word) there is something about fall that makes me love it and it can come into a good poem as you have proved

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Jeannie Ann Clark 06 January 2008

Keep writing...this one is good...I can feel this one; I have lived this one, long ago....thank you.

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