I sit staring out the window.
I watch trees shed life as
the fall air fills the lungs 
of the lost and the hopeless.
                
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Keep writing...this one is good...I can feel this one; I have lived this one, long ago....thank you.

 
                     
                
i like it, the poeticness of it (if thats a word) there is something about fall that makes me love it and it can come into a good poem as you have proved