Tragedy Or Happy Ending Part 2 Comments

The dead one may bless you or not but you have to lead this mortal life in all situations and with varied feelings. If you can do this, you may go ahead. What else can I say?

i love the way you wrote this poem and the words you picked were perfect the way they role of the tongue good write and i also think the fact that it is a true story as well

i love the way you wrote this poem and the words you picked were perfect the way they role of the tongue good write and i also think the fact that it is a true story as well

It was the destiny it has been written so Which let some of us die and the rest of us go Penetrating lines, well done poem

Beautiful and full of emotion.

A fine complement to the first write... regards Alf

well, it is very beautiful poem, great feeling 10

In this poem it sounds like nobody is leting you go And you feel like you dying every day. if you had or have a strict parent you know what I am talking about. They always seems to spunk you because they believe by spanking that you will learn better and will behave better. That is not true

Well expressed..good write

Hi Luwi - This is a perfect complement to part 1 - I love the sentiments. 'Your death became our ADHESIVE' 'It was the DESTINY' 'I will take good care of him' 'Wish me a good husband - Wish him a great wife'. Beautifully written I score it a MAX. Love in poetry - JOHN.

again very touching and with powerful emotions that flow all over the poem and there is no need to say that you wrote it with an excellent rhyme and that's very difficult sometimes because you have to keep your line of thought, not only it has to rhyme excellent job 10+++++