Tragedy Or Happy Ending Part 1 Comments

It is tragic but the tradition is there in some places and people in the sub-continent too.

Hello Luwi... here you highlight an Old Testament tradition... well put Fond regards Alf

A touching story...and interesting write.....nice reading....thank you

excellent indeed! 10+

Hi Luwi - This poem contains a beautiful but tragic concept. When a man is in love with a lady who has a sister - he normally develops a deep bond of 'brotherly love' for the sister. Also it is not uncommon if a ppartner or a fiancee dies for the man to marry her sister. In some cultures it might even be obligatory! In addition to the powerful content of the poem - It has rhyme and rythm and metre and is lovely to recite. V 1 is a tragedy V 2 is a memory V 3 iis a dilemma V 4 suggests a solution V 5 results in a very very happy ending - I have seen this happen. Where a man has married his sister-in-law and evryone has been very very happy about it. Your use of English is very elegant. I score it a MAX. Love in poetry - JOHN.

oh wonderful insightful thoughts and touching feelings have perfectly been elucidated keep up your great job, im looking forward to read the second part in a moment 10++++

The last line and the idea contained therein - A particular act cannot replace some other kindred feeling. Superimposition of feelings, ideas and images won't actually work in real life. This is because one cannot always superimpose his whims and fancies on a real living person. According to our varying thoughts, our relationship also would change. This is only a dream situation. What we need is acceptance of a situation. All kinds of situations are possible in life and we have to bear the cross. One situation won't actually replace a lost situation in real life especially when we are dealing with persons. Real problems can crop up. ' After your accidental death never' - The grammar is incorrect.

That poem is very interesting. I believe that a happy ending is when people die in their sleep. When somebody is mudered it is a tragedy.

Those words are penned with beautiful expression.

Wow. Wow. Wow. Amazing piece of work. Keep it up Luwi. You're really blessed with a talent

that is a lovely poem luwi poetry is a wonderful thing and a good outlet for depression read my poem 'what is poetry' thank you for letting, e know about it a very good write!

a poem with nice thoughts.nicely composed.voted10 surya

Good thought. Nice to read. Excellent narration.

interesting poem a happy one i think 10

Fine poem looking forward to part 2.. good write

Not to intact the relation with your family I pay attention from your sibling to your young lady I think so that would be better Making your sister my wife for future As I have to fulfill the portion of nature I married your sister with your memory inside me for ever.i may term itas mixture of both the feeling but more of happy ending as tht leads tothe fulfillment of partial desire...lovely andbrilliant write from emrging poetess.....10 read mine goal....welcome... cuckoo...

No one is as perfect as you But I guess some one is alive almost like you If you are watching me from above Would you give me the sister you have? ? wow waht a sweet and with spritual touches written poem..appreciate your idea and the way you did it..heart inspiring and brain surprizing piece..loved it..well done 10/10

I like this poem. it was indeed fine.

the story u`ve created... amazingly felt, so quite, as if u were a cameraman in someone`s heart. absolutelly brilliant work

good poem, i like it 10+