Tragedy Comments
The days slipped by; the months morphed into years.
And between two continents-missing you
And moving on, the untamed ocean bears
Your memory. There's nothing I can do
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The sonnet format, the flow from one metaphor to the next - -this all adds to an exceptional read, wth very good word usage..... well done.....10 + + Fay
This one is really good as well...keep writing I loved the flow of this one!
A wonderfully penned love sonnet full of emotions. Well done, I love the use of words.
very nice poem, if the person about whom you've written this, reads your poem will never make you miss anymore...
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7/30/2025 6:43:45 AM # 1.0.0
WOW! ! this poem is awesome keep writing more poems they are really good