Friday, March 27, 2009

Tragedy Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the storm rages on and hope’s light is dimmed
The world carries on and doesn’t look in
Lives are lost and things are destroyed
Yet for some reason, help won’t deploy
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Vanessa Kingsley
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Greenwolfe 1962 11 April 2009

This poem read very much like RELEASE ME. It was unspectacular and plain. Again, the subject was and is ripe for expression but there is little here to excite the reader. The ending, once again, was lacking. Again, the meaning was clear to the reader but I'm not sure it would inspire much in the human mind. Fair again. GW62

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Barry A. Lanier 08 April 2009

I liked the theme of this poem so relavant with the current events going onin the world and our nation with an inclination toward advocacy and the nation and world coming to some conclusion on generating some solutions to our state of existence versus talking about it...

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Ken Suh 28 March 2009

This is VERY impressive :) I haven't read a peom with this kind of tone before! I love it's uniqueness! ! ! lol No DUH, it's YOU! ! ! ! lol 10+!

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Vanessa Kingsley

Vanessa Kingsley

Colorado Springs, Colorado
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