Thursday, July 11, 2019

Trafficking Customers Comments

Rating: 5.0

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their souls have gangrene
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Susan Williams
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Anjandev Roy 14 December 2020

Wisely written.........thank u, dear poetess.....anjandev roy.

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Susan Williams 19 September 2020

Thank you, Soran... I would have liked to name some names but the vile men come in every walk of life so it seemed best to keep it general instead of saying two specific names although we Americans know their names being one is rich and powerful and one was said to hang himself so as to not incriminate the other... not mentioning names though, you see. .

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Soran M. H 17 September 2020

The content of this poem is a high degree of humanity that not everyone can reach. She feels the suffering of every weak and oppressed wherever they are. We can only thank our talented poet Susan for her distinguished poetic works. with the top mark++

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Mj Lemon 12 March 2020

Very powerful poem, Susan. I think it can serve as a metaphor for anyone acting to corrupt innocence....in any way. A perfect 10.

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Susan Williams 15 March 2020

Thank you for seeing past the horribly obvious and seeing all the other ways innocence can be taken away.. Thank you for the 10, my friend

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 December 2019

Young flesh! ! Young ladies, ! ! Wealth and power! Muse of mankind on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Susan Williams 31 December 2019

You are such a faithful reader. Thank you!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 05 August 2019

A powerful strong poem on those who abuse the weaker. The disgust and loathing is deserved for such crimes. Such shocking molestation ah, , ! ! Kudos for your great expressing inking.! ! Pls pleez do comment/ review my newest poem too titled, " The Hajj pilgrimage "

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Susan Williams 11 August 2019

It's like an epidemic of rabies has been turned loose on our country... our world. On my way to read your newest poem!

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Bryony Sheldon 30 July 2019

An eloquent poem; the horrid, visual descriptions remind me of Dr John Cooper Clarke's " " (This is a compliment, haha) . Thanks for sharing- I can hear the disgust in your expertly-penned words and reading this was a great experience! 10+

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Susan Williams 01 August 2019

Thank you for your comment- -but oh how I wish this did not exist in the world and the heart of man- but wishes won't cure this plague

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 July 2019

beastly nature bears up beastly manners even in old age deadly!

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Susan Williams 01 August 2019

got that right, Mahtab

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Jane Campion 15 July 2019

I always am thrilled by reading your poems. This one has currency. So well put. Flesh is what they want and it must be young.

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Susan Williams 01 August 2019

Jane, thank you for your comments- -sad to say that it does indeed have currency- - would that the world would have no idea what it was about- -may we find a way to protect our young and vulnerable from the evil of these rich evil people

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 July 2019

The crime on is increasing day to day.. The old eyes for young flesh. They show their power with wealth. Though this poem is on brief yet its theme is great and it brings awareness to the society. Brilliant work.

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Susan Williams 01 August 2019

yes, my friend, it is brief- probably too brief for the topic but the topic makes me gag while writing about it so I can only imagine it makes the reader gag so I take mercy on you all and kept it brief- -thank you for your comments, my friend

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Nosheen Irfan 12 July 2019

Brilliant! Another theme that is universal. It's unbelievable how low mankind has fallen in its greed for money and power. A reflection of the base instincts of man, a piece spreading social awareness. Bravo!

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Susan Williams 30 July 2019

I swear the animal kingdom is more moral than mankind- -when it is cruel, it is because it has no instinct that tells it to kill quickly and not eat its dinner before it is dead. Mankind thrives on cruelty and vice- the uglier the better- and if money can be made than one should do it. regardless of any moral code. Maybe mankind is now sick unto death

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Bill Cantrell 11 July 2019

And it will be hushed up in 2 weeks, a slap on the wrist, because big names are in the mix, just disgusting! ! ! I agree with you, of corse the media will mention it because they have to at the moment but they will not pursue it...and that is where the story is

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Susan Williams 23 July 2019

So far the media has been nibbling around the news item- -but where oh where are the investigative reporters- - he made money off customers and there are records somewhere of these child molesting monsters attending parties at this creep's private islands etc... there was one report of Bill Clinton attending one and two reports of our illustrious star lover Trump palling around with the provider of little girls. - -need facts and arrests

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