Saturday, May 10, 2008

Traffic Jam Comments

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Sleepless nights travel by heavy vehicles
Bearing to account two- wheelers and cars
Across the red scream of a school boy
With a blessing of 'God be with you'
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Indira Renganathan
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Magadha Rani 08 February 2020

A wonderful write with spiritual vibes! Well penned dear madam! (Poetess Magadha)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 November 2019

This poem " Traffic Jam has been so touchingly and impressively delineated by you. I want to quote some lines here....Accross the red scream of a school boy / With a blessing of 'God be with you' / At the rear-face of a sacred auto-rickshaw/ There, an ambulance caring intensively. Beautiful poem with nice theme. Thank you dear madam.

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