Monday, March 16, 2015

Traffic Congestion Comments

Rating: 4.8

The roads of our life
Are clogged with traffic
Delaying our way to success
Arresting our future
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Kenneth Maswabi
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Rajnish Manga 16 March 2015

Great imagery and an amazing use of idiom provide extraordinary luster to the poem. I would like to quote: The roads of our life / Are clogged with traffic / Delaying our way to success / Arresting our future.

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Kenneth Maswabi 16 March 2015

Be blessed.Thank you

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Kenneth Maswabi

Kenneth Maswabi

Maun, Botswana
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