Friday, May 17, 2013

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It's eight o'clock
time to wake up
get ready for work
and iron my shirt
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Allen Steble The Philosophical Poet
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Wahab Abdul 19 May 2013

well said and well crafted poem on daily life with a tinge of fun, like it..

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 17 May 2013

You write very lovely poem plz read and rate my poems

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 17 May 2013

Is the traffic so bad in Perth?

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Kiran Prasad 17 May 2013

I like the simplicity of your write

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Leonard Dabydeen 17 May 2013

Interesting and thought-provoking poem. It gives the reader that feeling of routine daily working life caught up in Traffic. The repetition of the second stanza...Bumper to bumper/ underscores the routine. Good flow and imagery. Thanks for sharing.

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Barb Mcavaney 17 May 2013

a busy time in traffic

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