Traders Of The Lost Arc Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Traders Of The Lost Arc

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‘Adventure'
they promised;
‘safe vessel
to dive
all the depth
to the lost arc
and more'
said they;
‘don't worry,
I'll travel with you'
the CEO was sure!

He did; when
the submarine
collapsed
under the pressure
of a water column
3.8 kilometres tall
they vanished;
so did the guests:
crumbled,
vanished
into thin air
underwater.


Note: The wreck of the Titanic lies at a depth of about 12,500 feet (3,800 metres; 2,100 fathoms) , about 370 nautical miles (690 kilometres) south-southeast off the coast of Newfoundland. It lies in two main pieces about 2,000 feet (600 m) apart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon 11 September 2024

2) the underwater carrier should Habeeb tested under such simulated conditions by "real" scientists, not by pseudo scientists, beforehand

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon 11 September 2024

Science is unmistakable. The pressure of 3800 m (plus a cushion of another 1000m) of water is easy mathematics. It can be simulated in a suitably equipped laboratory.

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Where have all the comments made by fellow-poets gone?

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Traders of misfortune, for themselves too!

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Sandra Feldman 07 July 2023

Such a well written and deeply felt poem on such a difficult sad subject. So perfectly conveyed.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

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PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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