Sunday, October 9, 2005

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Rating: 2.8

Snowflakes fall
in silence.
As not to wake
the beating heart
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 09 October 2005

Very nice...I felt the rythmn of it. I liked it!

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Raynette Eitel 09 October 2005

Herbert, your first stanza promised more than it delivered. It is just lovely and musical and thrummed my heartstrings. More, more. Raynette

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