Sunday, August 23, 2009

Tracing Patterns Comments

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As daylight fades breathing slows
Settling into a steady rythmn
Eyes close and rest descends
Like the blanket tucked around you
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Fiona Davidson
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T S 30 August 2009

Fiona This is such a moving tearjerker And as always a masterpiece Tracy

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maggie murray 24 August 2009

keep those fingers tucked in Fi...a beautiful moving poem..Maggie

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Carol Gall 23 August 2009

fi angels will come and he will soar held in their loving arms

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Sue Sie 23 August 2009

A tear trickles down my face as I read the sadness that envelopes me in reading these words.....A heart tugging poem that reaches out with both hands...to you Sue x

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Fay Slimm 23 August 2009

Whispering of the echoes of parting - - Fi. this piece hangs in the heart of the reader - -..... hugs to my friend - - - from Fay.

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