I find a new fire burning
With colourful flames hitherto unseen.
I find that it is burning
With fumes soaring to skies hitherto unreached.
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A prelude to something drastic, may be good for everybody! Carry on Dinesh!
A fine introduction.Please share the brutal truth in coming lines..
Tracing one's identity in a hostile world is a self effacing task. Even when your soul has burnt down to cinders, with what is left of you, you want to speak out the 'brutal' truths. This surrealist write goes over my head! ! This is too deep for me! !
With what little is left over in me since I have to trace a form of mine Surrealistic presentation of thoughts of the mind. Poem nicely crafted. Thank you.
Tremendous verse. I like yr style of writing dear poet. You deserve a pat :) for writing this well versed verse.
the poet speaks from his heart, vivid images