Friday, October 4, 2013

Tracing Me Out.. Comments

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I find a new fire burning
With colourful flames hitherto unseen.
I find that it is burning
With fumes soaring to skies hitherto unreached.
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M D Dinesh Nair
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Heather Wilkins 12 October 2013

the poet speaks from his heart, vivid images

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 10 October 2013

A prelude to something drastic, may be good for everybody! Carry on Dinesh!

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Heather Wilkins 08 October 2013

a god write. enjoyed the read.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 06 October 2013

A fine introduction.Please share the brutal truth in coming lines..

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Valsa George 05 October 2013

Tracing one's identity in a hostile world is a self effacing task. Even when your soul has burnt down to cinders, with what is left of you, you want to speak out the 'brutal' truths. This surrealist write goes over my head! ! This is too deep for me! !

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 04 October 2013

With what little is left over in me since I have to trace a form of mine Surrealistic presentation of thoughts of the mind. Poem nicely crafted. Thank you.

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Harindhar Reddy 04 October 2013

Tremendous verse. I like yr style of writing dear poet. You deserve a pat :) for writing this well versed verse.

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