Sunday, June 25, 2017

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Walking down the road
looking for a purpose;
wondering why so much of life
can come and hurt us -
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Smoky Hoss
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Dee Corpolongo 08 July 2017

This is yet another great writing and observation turned into a poem, and oh how true.... look into the eyes of a sweet child and see hope...I truly hope and pray that your last lines are really true......Great synopsis and thinking.....and....great poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Lawerence Mize 02 July 2017

Well stated Smoky. Uplifting as always.

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Rini Shibu 25 June 2017

Never forget earth and heaven belong to the small Lonely and meek...nice++10

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