We don't have to make a request for our peace,
and don't have to escape from the life's pace!
Peace may not have place to define in what we see..,
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Sadly.. how can I say about this? ? : (my this Poem was selected as POD only for line 'the start also must lie in our silence' which is a subtle warning too, telling me to stay Silent: (((So sad PH is also being used for Politics! !
Until the last line, I was with you. Peace needs to be spoken, advocated. Not with violence or threats, but with words to inspire. Congrats, Siddhartha.
Having an open mind definitely brings peace! Nicely done and congratulations on POD! :)
Beautiful poem on Peace. Very true said in few lines.... It may look like a big work of beginning, but the fruits of the wait are a sure promising! Silence can surely bring peace within and to our surroundings. Congratulations on member poem of the day.
Congratulations on your poem Trace Of Peace being selected as Member Poem Of The Day.
A lovely poem on peace, Siddartha. Peace has no noise but it has abundance of love and compassion that can sustain all. Being peaceful is the best way of life. Hearty Congratulations! God bless! .....10
You are right. If we are sincere to establish peace it is not a difficult task though it seems so. Nice poem. Congrats on being chosen poem of the day.
A beautiful poem of the day…….Congratulations! A great inspirational write! In particular, the last two lines have immense strength. Thanks for sharing.
since we all know that peace has no noise, the start also must lie in our silence! Beautiful poem. Congratulations.
A beautiful poem with great message has been shared incisively. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.
A wonderful peaceful poem that hopefully points the way? ......well penned Siddartha
since we all know that peace has no noise, the start also must lie in our silence nice writing couplet with philosophical mood
Well penned my friend! many congratulations for this beautiful poem being chosen as POD!
Love the first and last two stanzas! How beautiful are the ideas - we don't have to make a request for our peace, and That peace has no noise. Keep writing Poet!
So true, peace has no noise, the start also must lie in our silence! I have quoted your final line. It seems simple but herein lies a great thought out idea.I have followed your Trace of Peace. I must admit this is a poem of a mature poet. The philosophical inisghts are so wise. My grand applause for this precious write.Thank you for sharing!
Beautiful thought.........10++++++++++