Monday, August 24, 2009

Trace Of Peace! Comments

Rating: 4.8

We don't have to make a request for our peace,
and don't have to escape from the life's pace!

Peace may not have place to define in what we see..,
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Siddartha Montik
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Ayan Mondal 12 February 2019

Beautiful thought.........10++++++++++

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Siddartha Montik 18 July 2018

Sadly.. how can I say about this? ? : (my this Poem was selected as POD only for line 'the start also must lie in our silence' which is a subtle warning too, telling me to stay Silent: (((So sad PH is also being used for Politics! !

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Kelly Kurt 17 July 2018

Until the last line, I was with you. Peace needs to be spoken, advocated. Not with violence or threats, but with words to inspire. Congrats, Siddhartha.

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Aqua Flower 17 July 2018

Having an open mind definitely brings peace! Nicely done and congratulations on POD! :)

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Oduma Alex 17 July 2018

beautifully written I love it

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Geetha Jayakumar 17 July 2018

Beautiful poem on Peace. Very true said in few lines.... It may look like a big work of beginning, but the fruits of the wait are a sure promising! Silence can surely bring peace within and to our surroundings. Congratulations on member poem of the day.

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Lamar Cole 17 July 2018

Congratulations on your poem Trace Of Peace being selected as Member Poem Of The Day.

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A lovely poem on peace, Siddartha. Peace has no noise but it has abundance of love and compassion that can sustain all. Being peaceful is the best way of life. Hearty Congratulations! God bless! .....10

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Anil Kumar Panda 17 July 2018

You are right. If we are sincere to establish peace it is not a difficult task though it seems so. Nice poem. Congrats on being chosen poem of the day.

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Irfanulla Shariff 17 July 2018

A beautiful poem of the day…….Congratulations! A great inspirational write! In particular, the last two lines have immense strength. Thanks for sharing.

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Savita Tyagi 17 July 2018

since we all know that peace has no noise, the start also must lie in our silence! Beautiful poem. Congratulations.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 July 2018

A beautiful poem with great message has been shared incisively. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

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Nosheen Irfan 17 July 2018

Full of wisdom and depth. A lovely pick of the day. Congrats.

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Tom Allport 17 July 2018

A wonderful peaceful poem that hopefully points the way? ......well penned Siddartha

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Akhtar Jawad 17 July 2018

Congrats! A poem with a great message.

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Mahtab Bangalee 17 July 2018

since we all know that peace has no noise, the start also must lie in our silence nice writing couplet with philosophical mood

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 July 2018

Well penned my friend! many congratulations for this beautiful poem being chosen as POD!

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Robert Murray Smith 17 July 2018

Idea good. Avoid exclamations. Last stanza best.

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 02 February 2018

Love the first and last two stanzas! How beautiful are the ideas - we don't have to make a request for our peace, and That peace has no noise. Keep writing Poet!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 February 2018

So true, peace has no noise, the start also must lie in our silence! I have quoted your final line. It seems simple but herein lies a great thought out idea.I have followed your Trace of Peace. I must admit this is a poem of a mature poet. The philosophical inisghts are so wise. My grand applause for this precious write.Thank you for sharing!

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