Tuesday, July 24, 2018

Toy Seller Is Waiting Comments

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Rush is in fair, toys have gathered,
In this stall of toy seller we see,
Varieties of toys children like,
Parents will chose soon for them,
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 November 2022

A fabulous poem. Fascinating expression. Loved this poem dear poet. God bless you

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Caleb Wiggins 07 October 2020

I entirely feel my street where toy seller sales his toy. A nice observation you have presented.

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 August 2019

Toys for children! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mahtab Bangalee 26 July 2018

nice writing- nostalgic I am in this poem

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 July 2018

oy seller will sell and children will buy/Parents will pay penny for toys to the buyer.....Children love toys! Parents should get a lot of pleasure in buying toys from the fair! An amazing poem is shared....10

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Hazel Durham 25 July 2018

The sheer delight of going to the fair is beautifully expressed, as the children excited looking for new toys and the toy seller waiting expectantly in anticipation at a good days work! Great write!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 July 2018

A fascinating poem with a meaningful message. Toys are and will always be significant on childhood development. Toys are used to entertain kids and they also help them learn about the world around them. They are considered as the child's first possessions. A profound piece of work worthy of 10++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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