Thursday, November 5, 2015

Toy Comments

Rating: 4.5

All my poems are for you now
And I want to become your toy.
The part of your soul, your body.
Submissive to any joy.
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Liza Sud
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Sanjukta Nag 06 November 2015

If he torns the body you wear He will give another one soon. wow this is a very striking couplet.. great work.

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M Asim Nehal 05 November 2015

And this lucky guy will live for ever in your love...........Awesome poem LIZA.

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Ari Alsio 05 November 2015

And I want to become yours toy; p)

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