Saturday, April 3, 2010

Toxic Fantasy Comments

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His words sting
echoing through corridors
darkened by hate
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robyn selters
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Ray Schreiber 04 April 2010

Well done, stripping away any pretense of sensuality, your poem paints it's subject in the unflattering glare of naked light bulb on ' whitewashed walls '.

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