Thursday, July 21, 2011

Towards Perfect Holiness Comments

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The more holy, I try to be,
The more temptations seem to come;
I query why unfair to me,
Is God to my people, my home!
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Dr John Celes
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Hans Vr 22 July 2011

John, I like the way you think. Sometimes we try hard but still fail. Bigger obstacles sometimes in our way. Reflection brings about the answers (that is the very best part of the poem) then we keep growing. We may never reach perfection but as long as we keep trying to improve we are moving in the right direction. The rhymes go very well in this poem.

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