John, I like the way you think.
Sometimes we try hard but still fail.
Bigger obstacles sometimes in our way.
Reflection brings about the answers (that is the very best part of the poem)
then we keep growing.
We may never reach perfection but as long as we keep trying to improve we are moving in the right direction.
The rhymes go very well in this poem.
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John, I like the way you think. Sometimes we try hard but still fail. Bigger obstacles sometimes in our way. Reflection brings about the answers (that is the very best part of the poem) then we keep growing. We may never reach perfection but as long as we keep trying to improve we are moving in the right direction. The rhymes go very well in this poem.