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Life is like a ship that sails on the sea of time. In the time of sailing it has to face many hindrances as well many friends. Friendship or love is the most precious treasure, that gold dont have. Dear Soul, being inspired by Captain Cur you are the prominent captain of this beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

Hunt for treasure! ! Thanks for sharing.

A ship sailing over the not so merciful seas. Those on board heeds the Captains orders so that they may arrive safely to their destination. The sea and wind though is controlled by the hands of God. All on board must play their part to see that the ship and everyone survives. Please read my poem An Angry Sea. A very inspiring write.

whenever we choose the ships to board such as friendship, hardship, dictatorship and many more, we are in trouble and this concept is further strengthened through the words and commands..

You have built all the thought on symbolism from sea and ship. I feel some of the lines could have been arranged easily into rhymes but perhaps it's poet's choice. I remember a writing by Khalil Gibran that our lives are ships sailing on the ocean of time and our passions are like sails.

Excellently written poem my friendship ha ha ha! And thanks for your comment on my new poem... No comparisons, but I agree with Robert. Siya_! !

A golden epic and how nicely poetic way u draw d analogy btw a ship n humans n sea, wow!

A marvelous poem, Soul! Philosophical, telling the truth of life.

I think you are b.etter than the captain

there really was no need for a lengthy poet note... the poem is open to the mind and wit as a nice piece of verse.... talking of the time and tide. although a bit drawn out but the serrated effect it creates physically is a pointer to the vagaries of time a wave like effect now rising now falling.... v nice liked reading cheers

Beautiful images woven into a poem with great meaning. Excellent soul.

Superb write Soul, enjoyed reading.

You have a sensitive soul and wherever you go your friends will be with you. By sea, air or earth. Always protecting you! Kisses Soul. You know how make a friendship.

we make our friendship like a ship.guide it toward the destination like a captain.friendship would be the most precious thing that a captain can pirating.~nb

Wow! One of your best. A classic here on Poemhunter. I love your poems! !

If we survive the storms, we'll again something rarer than gold. Lovely meaning -A

Woooooooooww gorgeous

''And love is a direction'' wonderful line.. and i am with Captain Cur while assessing the poem.. love it.. very much.full 10..

A magnificent poem filled with vivid scenes and deep emotion. Friendship is more valuable than gold, what are all the worlds riches if we have not one to call a friend. Thank you for these beautiful words, they sparkle like gems and will line and compass my treasure map, speaking of which, I came upon an ancient document, much adventure awaits us my dear friend.

Splendid poem, Soul, splendid! Terry